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Peter Whisenant's avatar

A curious piece. It seems part prayer--but to whom or what I couldn't say--and part threat. Both humble and aggressive. As I said, a curious piece. I did not read your commentary, but now I will.

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Tim Jagodzinski's avatar

Thank you for your interpretation! This was what I was going for.

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S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

Really enjoyed the poem and commentary in its entirety. I love that you are posting now. It's good to be able to connect more with you in this way.

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Tim Jagodzinski's avatar

Thank you!

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Daan Katz's avatar

Another beautiful poem.

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Angela van Son Poetry's avatar

I liked the poem, and chose to not read your explanation. I'm curious and might read it some other time. But for now the poem gets to have its own life in my head.

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