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Paul John Dear's avatar

Both poems are clearly rooted in the original wound and the explanation you offer as Thoughts helps to understand that more. I find this area to have been a ripe one for exploration personally. Keep on keeping on.

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Josh Datko's avatar

The metronome is a very nice addition.

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Alex Jenkin's avatar

I enjoyed the subtle intensity of both those pieces ❤️

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teatablepoet's avatar

As for me:

in honest revelation

I see no time has past

Without my tribulations

Of what is not to last.

I do now see tomorrow,

But through the eyes of doing

-Lest I worry to burrow

In bushes of late autumn

Amidst the burning summer

I do not see the sky

Why? Oh why? Oh why? Oh why-

Was summer long times coming?

Thus- worry less of how,

And focus more

-on doing.

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