Opportunities and improvements don’t always show up in full force, and often, a painful process is attached to them. But we do it; we take the fear and hurt inside of us, rip it out, and move forward.
It’s so good to read your writing! AND listen to you. For me poetry is a whole sensory package. Hearing the poet always heighten the experience for me. Hope to read and hear more from you!
Hearing the poet is so important. It embodies the poem from just visual to auditory. I always offer audio of my poems... mostly for me small dear paid subscribers group because poems... are meant to be heard, digested.
the idea of the painful, dirty process necessary for moving forward really comes through. Your poem evoked an image of pulling weeds for me.
Oh, pulling weeds, yes!
Great poem and the audio just knocks it out of the park.
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"dig up your fears/ the sun is leaking" Love those first two lines!
Lovely!!!
I love the idea of the sun "leaking."
I thought about it in a way, like when you have curtains and want the room to be dark, but on the sides of the curtains the light leaks into the room.
It’s so good to read your writing! AND listen to you. For me poetry is a whole sensory package. Hearing the poet always heighten the experience for me. Hope to read and hear more from you!
Hearing the poet is so important. It embodies the poem from just visual to auditory. I always offer audio of my poems... mostly for me small dear paid subscribers group because poems... are meant to be heard, digested.
I love this. Self discovery, new beginnings, bravery. Great imagery too
"The sun is leaking,
Through the blinds."
That's such a powerful image that I could see it as I read it. I really enjoyed reading this. Look forward to reading more eof your work.